Friday, May 4, 2012

Awesome story part 2

Here is the 2nd part of my awesome story:



“I hope this works.” Ms. Penelope said while dipping a ladle into her concoction she made earlier.
“Who wants to go first?” She asked the doves. When none answered she gently picked the fat one up and put him on the seat that she was sitting on. He tried to fly away, but Ms. Penelope held him down. She then she pinned him down so his stomach was facing up and opened up his beak. She picked up the ladle and gently poured the chipmunk bile down his throat while making magic motions with her hand. She made her hand tense with muscle and then waved it around like a river. Then she let it go boneless and wiggled it like she was conducting an orchestra. Then she closed up the dove’s beak, unaware of what would happen next. The dove’s eyes turned pink then yellow and then green. Seven feathers fell off it’s back as it shook, terrified. Ms. Penelope bit her lip as she watched the bird tumble and twist. Then all of the sudden, the bird turned normal white and it stopped twisting. It sat up straight and looked at Ms. Penelope as if it wanted to listen for a command.
“Oh, I do hope this works.” Ms. Penelope’s lip was bleeding from so much gnawing. She fetched one of her letters. She put it into the dove’s beak. She also told the dove where to drop it and to make sure it was a kid. The dove nodded in response and flew away like a fat, petite angel. The other doves stared in awe and shook terribly, afraid it was their turn.
“It worked! It worked! Now…for the others.” Ms. Penelope said and reached for another wriggling dove.
When the last dove had turned different colors and was off with the letter, Ms. Penelope sighed with hope and made herself a cup of green tea. She watched the last dove fly above the setting sun.
“ Oh, I do hope they want to help. Oh, I do hope.”


Chapter One

Eleven-year-old Adolfo Lupine paced up and down his stone pathway in Argentina. The pathway was black and shiny and on the sides it was garnished with beautiful purple lupines, in honor of his family’s last name. Although the pathway was beautiful, it didn’t have a welcome sign or a lamp near the entrance. Instead, it had a large iron gate that was always locked and the lupines were cut straight and firm like soldiers.
            “Oh, why is Mama so late? I hate being with Nanny!” Adolfo ran into the huge garden with an old woman in white clothes chasing after him.
            “Adolfo! Young man, when your parents said that you could get whatever you want, they didn’t mean you could run away from your nanny!” The nanny spoke to him in Spanish. The old woman stumbled as she ran. She dusted off her petticoat.
            “Huh! Adolfo, you can play in the garden. I’ll be watching you from the east master bedroom.” The nanny scolded him scornfully in Spanish. The nanny stomped away, mumbling about until Adolfo’s parents got home.
            “Why do Mama and Papa have to go to stupid balls? All I do is sit on a velvet stool and have my tutor teach me English! Ugh!” Adolfo groaned as he stomped passed the soldier-roses. Adolfo thought living in a mansion was worse than being in prison. Adolfo scratched at a scab. The only place he could do that was in private. Well, he actually wasn’t supposed to do it ever, but especially not in public.
            “I hate being stuck in my mansion! I’m not allowed to do anything a normal kid could do! My life’s so…oh what is that word in English? Oh, yes! Boring. And dull! Ugh!” Adolfo kicked a stump.
            “Ouch! Why’d I do that?” Adolfo hit his head, annoyed. The lupines suddenly looked dreadful and Adolfo wanted to scream and run away, but the gate surrounded all thirty acres of the mansion.
            “Ah!” Adolfo did a petite and quiet scream, as he was allowed to do that and only that. Adolfo groaned. He felt like a bear trapped in a zoo. There were always people asking him:  “Adolfo, would you like a snack?” or, “Adolfo, what would you like? Just name it!” It was the most obnoxious life ever! Adolfo got so indignant that he picked up a rock and threw it up into the sky. He put his hands up to catch it, but instead it hit a bird and the dove (apparently, it was a dove) fell down into his hands instead.
            “Huh!” Adolfo gasped. He’d never touched an animal before and he’d only seen a couple of dogs. This must be a bird.
            “What should I do? Give it to Nanny? No, she’d through it out the window and yell at me for touching an animal! Maybe I should bury it? It is dead, after all.” Just then, the dove opened his eyes and flew out of Adolfo’s hands.
            “I guess not.” Adolfo sighed. Just then, he noticed that the dove had dropped a letter into his clean and perfect palms. But before he could read it, a rumbling sound of rubber wheels driving on pebbles sounded from the entrance of his mansion. He stuffed the letter into his pocket; he would read it later.
            “Mother and Father!” Adolfo cried, jumping for joy. He ran and greeted his elegant mother and father as they stepped out of the limo.
            “Hello, Mother! Hello, Father! How was the ball?” Adolfo said, hugging his ruby-covered mother. The woman pulled him away from her silk dress like a dog pulling off a flea.
            “Adolfo, I’m disgusted of you! You’re pants are ripped and there’s dirt covering your neck! And your English sounds horrid, did you practice?” Mrs. Lupine spoke in perfect English and frowned at her stout son.
            “Um...well, you see I got tired of learning so I went into the garden.” Adolfo’s face got red as a chili pepper when he admitted that he skipped his tutoring. His mother looked down in disgust.
            “Did Nanny have to chase you like last week?” Mr. Lupine asked, speaking Spanish and tapping his foot.
            “Uh…well…” Adolfo stuttered until the nanny stomped indignantly out of the mansion. Her dress was filthy and her hair was like a bird nest.
            “Oh, you bet I had to chase him! It was worse than last week! I ran down the flight of stairs, threw the kitchen and out the door until he hid in the garden. I had to give up and watch him from inside the house!” The nanny screamed so close to Mr. and Mrs. Lupine’s faces that they could smell her stinky breath.
            “Adolfo, young man, is this true?” Mrs. Lupine asked him. Adolfo winced. He knew what was coming next.
            “Yes. It is true. I am ashamed.” Adolfo said, blushing more furious than ever.
            “Well, you should be! Go up to your room and prepare for a nice whipping!” Mr. Lupine screamed at him, pointing with his gloved hand to Adolfo’s room.
           



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